While I was away last week, a reader wrote in about a facebook discussion on how long referee reports should be. What is too short? What is too long? I think these are really good questions, as philosophers rarely discuss how to write referee reports. In this post, I'd like to solicit answers to the reader's query, and also offer some general tips I think may be helpful for writing good reports.

As an author, I have received referee reports that are just a few sentences or short paragraph long. While I have no idea whether this is because the report itself was so short, or because the editor chose to only forward a small part of the review, I have to confess that I find these types of reviews deeply frustrating. It is difficult to spend weeks, months, or (in some cases) years working on a paper, then wait several months patiently while the paper is under review, only to receive a very short report that merely says (but doesn't show in any clear way) that the paper is worthy of rejection. I think we owe authors better than this, even authors of papers we think are very bad. A good review–even a good review of a bad paper–should substantiate its judgments of the paper's merits. And this is takes a fair number of words.

How many words? Each case is unique of course, but for my part I try to compose really conscientious reports: reports that give a clear editorial recommendation, briefly review the parts of the author's argument I evaluate, and provide clear reasons why I think those parts of the argument warrant the recommendation I give. So, I took a look at some of my recent reports this morning. How long are they on average? My shortest report was 500 words, my longest 3,000 words, and the median length something like 1,500 words. I'm curious how this compares to other people's reports. So, let me ask: how long are your referee reports, on average?

Finally, let me offer a few brief tips based on how I write reports:

Tip 1 – provide a clear editorial recommendation. Some referee reports are confusing. The referee may say some complimentary things, then some very critical things – yet it may not be clear what they are recommending (acceptance?, rejection?, revise and resubmit with major revisions?, etc.). I always try to make my recommendation clear–with a very brief preview of my reasons for it–in my very first paragraph. Alternatively, if I am torn between more than one recommendation (e.g. I am unsure whether to recommend rejection or R&R), I'll try to be forthright about that as well.

Tip 2 – summarize relevant arguments before commentary. I expect many of us have received referee reports where a critique is given that appears to us (as authors) to misunderstand our claims/argument. Because I want to avoid this as a referee, I always try to concisely summarize the portion of the paper in question (citing relevant passages of the text) before providing my evaluation. I do this to try to make it clear to the author and editor that I read the paper carefully and tried to understand the argument charitably. This is the sort of thing I like from referees as an author. Moreover, in one case this made a big difference for the outcome of a paper I reviewed: the author received an R&R, explained how I misunderstood part of the argument, and I accepted their explanation (with the paper ultimately being accepted). Although in this case I did make an interpretive mistake as a referee (nobody's perfect!), making my interpretation clear enabled the author to make me and the editor aware of the mistake: a good result.

Tip 3 – begin with some complimentary remarks. It's true, some papers one reviews are bad. While I think some people overplay how many papers are bad or how bad they are (I've heard some people say 90% of papers are "garbage"), one nevertheless reviews papers sometimes one considers unpublishable. How should one respond to these papers? I know from online chatter that I'm not the only person who has received absolutely brutal reviews, where literally every sentence in the review makes it clear that the paper itself is a Punishable Offense Against Reason and Philosophy. I think these kinds of reviews are appalling. As problematic as a paper may be, the paper made it past the desk-rejection stage, the person wrote it is a human being who probably put a great deal of time into it, and there are usually some good things about it. Consequently, I try whenever possible to begin my reviews with something complimentary about the paper before providing a more critical analysis.

Tip 4 – critique with neutral language. Some reviews contain aggressive or unkind language (e.g. "This paper is terrible and looks like it was written by an undergraduate or first-year grad student). As an aside, I know a leading figure who recently received a report like this, despite the fact that they are recognized as one of the most important modern-day figures in their entire field and continue to publish in their discipline's highest-ranked journals (it is almost certainly not true that their paper was of the quality of an undergraduate paper). In any case, I think we owe our colleagues better than this. Instead of using colorful language, I think it is best to use purely descriptive language in composing one's report, such as "The argument is unsound for reasons X, Y, and Z." There is no reason to go beyond this, saying the argument is unsound and an Offense Against Reason.

Tip 5 – if revisions are suggested, give suggestions. Some referee reports recommend revision. Yet it is frustrating when they recommend this but give no clue what the referee might be looking for in revisions. Consequently, when I recommend revisions, I try whenever possible to provide some brief suggestion(s) of ways to move forward (e.g. "While I think this part of the argument is problematic, here is one way I think the author might revise the paper to address it"). While I think few referees do this, in the end I think it probably saves referees time – as it doesn't leave the author in the dark. After all, what does take a lot of time? Answer: the author revising their paper in ways that don't address one's concerns, leading either to a second R&R or another referee report where you have to explain why they didn't do so very well. Better, I think, to point them in the right direction from the outset, at least if you sense there is a particular direction they should go with the revisions (at least in terms of satisfying you as a reviewer).

Anyway, these are just a few things I try to do in my reviews. What do you do and why?

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11 responses to “Reader query on writing referee reports”

  1. Zebra

    Marcus,
    I just counted the words in the last 10 referee reports I wrote. They range from 237 words to 601, with a mean of 454 words. I always summarize the author’s argument, assess its relevance for the journal, and then provide an assessment of its suitability for publication. This is followed by a justification of my assessment. Editors love me – I return reviews in less than 10 days, and they know exactly why I made the assessment I did. I review about 15 to 25 papers a year now, and I am invited to review about 10 to 20 more a year.

  2. Michel

    I think those tips are right on the money. At least, they’re exactly how I’ve structured my own reports, based on the best reports I’ve received.
    So far, my average first-round report length is 2493 words (with my shortest around 1500), although that includes positioning quotes and the short note reserved for the editor, some of whose content gets duplicated in the part of the report that’s for the author. So I’m on the long side of things, although it’s worth saying that I’ve turned in all of my reports before their deadlines, and I try to get them in several weeks in advance.
    For comments received on initial submissions, I get on average 902 words. That looks pretty good, but it’s brought up significantly by subfield journals, where I receive lengthy comments. With a couple of notable exceptions, generalist journals have tended to offer rejections with 0-200 words in comments.

  3. Amanda

    I’m not sure who are reviewing my papers, but it sure isn’t Marcus or Michel! I would say the majority of referee reports I get back are about an average of 200-300 words per reviewer. My own referee reports are probably an average of about 500 words – but I haven’t checked.
    Personally I would be interested if people also mentioned how long the reports they receive are, in addition to how long they write their reports.
    I personally like referee reports which are short, clear, and to the point. I want them to let me know how they think I should change the paper. I rarely see a need to do this in a way that is more than a few clear sentences. Now that doesn’t include the part where they might summarize my arguments. I think that would be great, as it does show as Marcus notes that they read the paper carefully. However I have never had this before, and I don’t really expect it to become common practice even though I wish it did.
    One thing I wish reviewers would be able to distinguish between is points they think are dead wrong, and points they think are unreasonable. There are lots of famous papers, and famous philosophers, who I disagree with strongly. I still think they are good philosophers. But it seems to me most reviewers have this impression that if the conclusion is dead wrong the author must be terrible at philosophy. I also wish journals would publish more interesting work and less careful but boring work.

  4. Marcus Arvan

    Hi Amanda: I’ve tended to get very short reports from high-ranked journals, and longer reports from lower-ranked ones. I wonder if others have had a similar experience.

  5. anonymous

    My reports are usually in the 1000-1500 word range.
    For what it’s worth, I disagree with Tip 5 (I think–I might be misunderstanding it) that (unless it is an extremely clear-cut case and there is an extremely clear-cut response) it is a good idea to give advice about how to fix a problem. (If you just meant “clearly identify the problems” then I completely agree.) I try to be the kind of referee who points out two big-picture problems (and if necessary, a few smaller issues) with every paper I referee, unless I think there are no problems (in which case I recommend acceptance); but who is very open to seeing how the author wants to go with those problems when I am re-refereeing an R&R. I changed my ways from suggesting ways the author might respond to problems, to leaving things open-ended, on the advice of a lot of people who I think are good referees. The idea here is that you might not be “inside the head” of the author enough to see how they should best respond to the issue (for example, it may be that the paper is just framed in a slightly misleading way, and fixing that would eliminate the problem).
    Of course, you might think “but isn’t it helpful to give a suggestion anyway?” my experience with R&Rs is that it isn’t. Even when referees say things like “here’s one suggestion for how to fix this problem, but it’s just a suggestion, you could go other ways” (which is the best possible version of how one could give a suggestion!) I still feel terrified that unless I use their suggested way out of the issue, they will reject my paper in the next round of revisions. So, the kind of referee I try to be is one who points out problems (nicely), and keeps as open mind as possible about what kinds of things an author might do to fix them. And these are the best referee reports I’ve gotten: ones where people suggest issues that need to be resolved, but don’t tell me how to resolve them.
    I should say this probably only applies to some kinds of issues. If there is an extremely straightforward problem and a very straightforward solution (for example, if the author has screwed up some technical thing but the referee can see an easy way to fix it), I’m all for making the suggestion.
    Just some thoughts.

  6. anonymous

    I should have said, I agree with Tips 1-4!

  7. Marcus Arvan

    Hi anonymous: Thanks for sharing, and glad to hear you agree on tips 1-4. Let me try to clarify what I had in mind with tip 5, as well as my rationale for it. Curious to hear what you think.
    The following has happened to me a few times as an author. A reviewer has some serious concerns, and the verdict is an R&R. I then revise the paper to address the concerns, and think they do so well. However, the reviewer is unsatisfied with the revisions, and then explains why…only after the paper is revised-and-resubmitted (and, in some cases, rejected). Further, in some such cases it seems like the reviewer may have had what they were looking for in mind all along. Which is frustrating! If only the reviewer had pointed me at least broadly in the direction of what they were looking for (and, as we all know, people are idiosyncratic), I might have revised the paper better and gotten in accepted.
    This is why, when I raise concerns and recommend a R&R or conditional acceptance, I try to give the author (and editor) some idea what I think a good strategy might be. This isn’t to say that I go into great detail or try solve the problems I raise for them (which I think would be bad, as it would be me dictating to them what to do). Rather, it is to say that I don’t like the standard “adversarial” approach where all one does is raise problems for an author without providing any positive direction for how the author might solve them. I pursue Tip 5 because I think philosophy–including the process of peer-review–should be rather conceived as a collaborative and constructive enterprise, one where we (at least ideally) do more than just raise problems but try to help each other find solutions. If the author doesn’t like whichever “tip” or direction I point them in, they are free to revise their paper however they like – and they may well convince me that a different approach is better. I just want to do my best to avoid the (common) situation where the author whose paper I’ve recommended an R&R for feels totally lost at sea trying to figure out what I might be looking for. That sort of thing frustrates me as an author and as a reviewer, as it just seems to me to make the process needlessly difficult. If as a reviewer I sense that direction X may be a good way to address my concern Y, why should I say so? Seems to me like a helpful thing to do!

  8. Josh Dever

    Something I wrote on this topic a while ago: http://worldofprofessionalphilosophy.blogspot.com/2017/03/refereeing-for-journals.html.

  9. Just want to say this is a really helpful post and thread, as someone both on the receiving and creating end of this process.

  10. Marcus Arvan

    Thanks Josh – that is a great resource!
    I guess the only thing I disagree with is your suggestion that referees should stay away from revise-and-resubmits. I think R&Rs are really important, as they can vastly improve papers before publication (I cannot even begin to say how much some of my papers benefited from R&R verdicts).
    Instead, I would suggest that referees (and editors) should give R&R verdicts only when they are reasonably confident that the paper will be publishable after revisions. I’ve had R&Rs where it was pretty clear a referee would be impossible to satisfy sufficiently to get them to advocate publishing the paper. In a few cases, this led to multiple R&Rs but ultimately a reject. If anything clogs up the system, cases like this do – and they are intensely frustrating, both for authors and (I think) reviewers!

  11. Amanda

    All my publications (and I have more than a few) have been randr’s. This seems standard these days. And why wouldn’t it be? There are no perfect papers. So if you think a paper is good enough to publish, you might as well offer advice for how to make it even better. This then results in some sort of “minor’ revisions. If a paper is not publishable as it is, but could be with some significant changes, then this is RanR with major revisions. Or so, this is my impression. I also think straight acceptances are rare because you would need two referees to recommends straight acceptance. This seems very unlikely. I have had 1 of 2 referees recommend immediate acceptance but never both. I myself have recommended immediate acceptance just once, and the other referee predictably did not.

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