In our newest "Ask a search-committee member" thread, Anon writes:
Cover letters for me are to some extent the most mysterious part of the application, so much so that I think they shouldn't even be required.
I have read here already that you can tell just by reading someone's cover letter that they are or are not a good fit.
But what are you really looking for in one?
Are you looking for the cover letter to convince you of fit for the position mostly?
Are you looking for the cover to convince you I have tailored it sufficiently and done research about your school?
Maybe I am alone in this but I find this aspect of the application the most frustrating to compose, especially without just repeating thing that are found elsewhere in my dossier.
Do you have like a checklist for what might be considered "best practice" in a cover letter?
This is a great query. I will be curious to hear what other search-committee members think. But let me begin by sharing a few thoughts.
As I mentioned a few years ago in our job-market boot camp, in my final year on the market I learned from a consultant that many job-candidates get cover-letters all wrong. My experience on four search-committees broadly confirms this (though there are many good cover letters too). For obvious reasons, I think there is probably a natural tendency for job-candidates to want to 'talk themselves up' in cover letters–to write the cover letter sort of like an attorney giving an opening statement in a jury trial, trying to convince the reader they are a good candidate. This can take many forms, such as by emphasizing that one has published in top-10 journals, or saying one is a passionate teacher, and so on. I suspect, however–and this is what the consultant told me too–is that this is probably precisely the wrong way to go about a cover letter. Why? My sense is that search-committee members probably tend to be trying to gleam two things from cover letters:
- What you are like as a person.
- How good of a fit you are for the position.
My sense then is that 'talking yourself up' in a cover letter is likely to be counterproductive on both counts. First, talking yourself up threatens to make you look arrogant and self-focused rather than a quietly accomplished professional who doesn't need to talk themselves up–the latter of which looks better. Second, talking yourself up does nothing to show 'fit' for the position. For example, if you are applying for a job at a teaching-focused institution and you wax poetic on your top-10 publications, you run a serious risk of looking out of touch with the job that you are applying for. On the other hand, if you are applying to a research institution, then there's no need to mention that you have published in top-10 journals, as the person reading your letter and CV will know that the journals you've published in (e.g. Mind, PPR, etc.) are great journals.
What does look good in cover-letters, then? Given that I've served on four search-committees, let me offer some general answers to the reader's questions (I don't want to give my own answers, as I'm not sure how representative my idiosyncracies are):
1. But what are you really looking for in one?: my sense is that search-committee members tend to be simply looking primarily for a brief, one-paragraph overview of your research (so that they have some idea what your research is about before wading into your file), a brief one-paragraph introduction to your teaching (both your teaching style and teaching experience, so that they can see whether you fit the job's needs), some evidence that you actually know something about their institution, and a few other 'objective' details, such as your AOS, some journals you have published in (just mentioning a few journal names, not ranks), ways you have contributed to your university or profession (viz. service), etc. Finally, above all, my sense is that search-committee members are looking to gleam something about who you are as a person. Are you a quietly confident professional who doesn't need to 'talk themselves up'? Or, do you come across insecure, arrogant, and self-impressed?
2. Are you looking for the cover letter to convince you of fit for the position mostly?: I worry about the word 'convince' in this question. As noted above, I think it is probably a mistake for candidates to regard their task in the letter to be convincing anyone of anything. Your task is to simply show who you are: what your research and teaching are about (in one short-paragraph each), what you are like as a person (a quiet professional), whether you bothered to do any research on the institution you're applying to.
3. Are you looking for the cover to convince you I have tailored it sufficiently and done research about your school?: I have no sense that this matters to committees at research universities. But teaching-focused universities or community-colleges? Absolutely. People hiring at these kinds of institutions tend to care about whether the person they hire fits the values of the university. Knowing something about the university is necessary for that. It also shows that you are conscientious, which people also care about this.
4. Maybe I am alone in this but I find this aspect of the application the most frustrating to compose, especially without just repeating thing that are found elsewhere in my dossier: lots of things in professional life are frustrating and repetitive. People want to hire someone who can deal with this conscientiously with this very fact of professional life. In any case, your cover-letter shouldn't just repeat stuff elsewhere in your dossier. Your cover letter's one-paragraph introduction to your research should be sparkling, as should your introduction to your teaching. And your cover letter is the only place in your dossier where you can show you did your homework on the place you are applying to. If your letter looks perfunctory because you regard writing it as a frustrating afterthought, then that can reflect very poorly on you. Look instead at the cover letter as an opportunity to briefly introduce your research, teaching, qualifications and other activities in the clearest and most concise way possible.
5. Do you have like a checklist for what might be considered "best practice" in a cover letter?: See above. Don't talk yourself up or try to convince anyone of anything. Your cover letter is not the place to 'sell yourself'. That runs the risk of making you come across as a huckster used-car salesperson. Instead, a cover letter should simply have the most sparkling short paragraphs on your research, teaching, and service that you can possibly write, simply telling the reader what your research is about, how you teach, what you have experience teaching, and what you have done to contribute to your university or the profession. It should also, at least for jobs at teaching universities, show familiarity with the institution, such as courses in the advertised AOS/AOC you might teach. Finally, the letter should speak to anything else emphasized in the job ad itself.
Anyway, these are just my thoughts. What are yours, those of you who have served on search-committees?
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